Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Letter to Cecile

We read and had a great discussion about the chapter Your Mother, NZila.  In this chapter Cecile wrote to Delphine.  If you were Delphine, how would you respond to Cecile?

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  1. Dear Cecile,

    I understand what you mean, but I don’t understand how one day I’ll see the truth in things. Everything is changing so fast and I’m slowing down.

    Yours truly.
    Delphine

    P.S. Darnell is home.

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    2. I like how you put P.s uncle Darnell is home.

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    3. What do you mean you don't know what she means

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    4. yeah what she says

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    6. I like it i think Delphine will maybe say that.

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  2. Dear Cecile,

    I know what you mean by saying that your name means
    what you want your name to be because we did this in
    school and it was fun. But why didn't you just tell me the
    truth so i can understand better and not always ask you
    a question on what you mean.

    Sincerely,
    Delphine

    P.S. I will stay eleven. I will stay eleven while i
    still can.

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    1. school is fun to Delphine but not fun to the other girls

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    2. what do you mean?

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    3. maryjane you did a good job i really like that you can really be Delphine

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    4. i like the part when you said P.S. I will stay eleven. I will stay eleven while i
      still can.

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  3. Dear Cecile,
    I didn't know that you had such a hard life. If i would've knew I wouldn't have asked. sorry. I wish
    you would've told me the full story about you. Again sorry for asking.
    Sincerly,
    Delphine

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    1. what did you say by I wouldn't have asked. sorry. I wish

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    2. She did tell Delphine her whole story in One Crazy Summer.

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    4. Cecile all ready told dephine the hole story!

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    5. No she didn't Ian c miller She didn't say she was born on the road or any of the other details about her self in One Crazy Summer

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    6. That also goes for everyone else.

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    7. WANNA BET!!!!

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  4. Now I understand a little more about who you are.
    Still I think you should have told me the truth.
    Uncle Darnall is back from war.
    I am grown up in fact I am in 6th grade.
    Also I am sit next Ellis carter.
    I hate him.

    Sincerely Delphine.

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    1. Cecile don't know Ellis

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    2. i like how you star off you letter

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    3. That doesn't mater because that's what I think Delphine would say to Cecile

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  5. i get it Cecile i know you is funny and i know you can do bad things sometime but you got to get it togther because you ani’t go have know friends but you is so cute but you got to tell me the truth because if you dont tell me the you ani’t go have know friends

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    1. why did you call Cecile cute

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    2. why are you talking slang.

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    3. next time you will know what to do read the book when we read

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    4. i kinda disagree on what you said about Cecile because it doesn't have nothing to do with this but i still like what you said

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    5. I don't know what nao means no slang word ian

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  6. Dear Cecile ,

    cecile i want you and pa to get back together. you know you still got feelings for him. I want you to get back together with him and i will love to have that and i want you and pa to get back together and get married.

    LOVE, DELPHINE

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    1. billy you did good why did you think of that i like that

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    2. i like that billy good job and i like the way you put a little explanation

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  7. Dear Cecile,

    I am happy to hear the truth. Thank you for being a good mom.Be who you are if you were born on the road.I dont care you are my mom thats why i love you so be who your are. I wish that you can come to brooklyn

    love your truly Delphine

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    1. i like your comment

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    2. way did you SA that

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    4. i like yours but the only thing wrong is you are just missing some periods

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    5. i think you letter was great. I think it great because of you sentences like "I am happy to hear the truth" because i think Delphine

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    6. good destine you did a good job keeep it up

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    7. you think Delphine what

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    8. nice letter. but dreuy is right

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    9. can i have a hug?

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  8. Dear Cecile,

    I get It.
    you just made something up that really matches you. I'm sorry for getting angry at you. I hope you forgive me.

    your daughter: Delphine

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    1. you is so kind because you made her really forgive full

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    2. you should add more to your stuff

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    4. add more like druey said

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    5. i get it thomas

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    6. i like yours because you put some learing into it

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    7. i like this good tj

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    8. i like the letter and you should of Capitoline words.

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  9. Dear Cecile,

    you lied to me and i know that you don't like
    pa but i want you to get with
    our father and i like to come
    and see you again and pa has a girlfriend and they are getting madder

    To cecile from delphine

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    1. great thinking jadien but they where not necessary geting madder they never even got in a fight

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    2. you have a good witting but edit more

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    3. Jaiden, I think what you meant to say is they are getting married, not madder. Just a little typo.

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  10. Dear Cecile,

    I really thought about your letter and what you said.And no matter who you are i still know that you are your beloved mother and even if you lived in the street I still love you as a wonderful mother.But you shouldn't lie to me about what your name means why did you tell me a lie.Last why did you make up what NZila means? Also I thought you weren't going to send me a letter so are you mad at me do you still love me as a daughter?

    Sincerely, your daughter Delphine

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    1. i really like yours but Nzila is spelled Nzilla and also Cecile didn't say shes not going to send another letter to Delphine.

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    2. Arely you did a good job.

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  11. Dear Cecile,
    Why would you lie to us about your name? Didn`t you love us when we were over their? What are you trying to hide from us? We are your kids not someone you lie to. I`m a black human being too and the only difference is that you are grown and you write poems. And ill stay eleven as long as I can.

    from your daughter,
    Delphine Gaither

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    1. . I`m a black human being too and the only difference is that you are grown and you write poems. And ill stay eleven as long as I can. I like what said but what do you mean

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    2. Druey how was Cecile trying to hide from them and i like your ending

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    3. like i don`t now probably like her self or something

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    4. To Destinee`s comment shes the same but just shes a little different from her.

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    5. yep good job $$

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    6. good destinee i dont understand the part when you said. i like what said but what do you mean

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    8. Druey I meant Delphine said that Cecile was not going to send her a letter.

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  12. to:cecile
    dear cecile how are you im fine i just want you to do one thing. be nice. ps:don’t yell. from:delphine

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    1. what did you do

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    2. good job i like your writeing

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    3. Malik you should of wrote Dear Cecile, in capitols and you need spaces in between Dear Cecile , and From Delphine

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    4. yeah sorry i need to fix it

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  13. Dear Cecile,

    Still you lied to us about what your name meant. Why? Why couldn't tell us what your name meant, but now thanks to Mr, Mwila I know I know what your real African name means .And I know you're a human being.A female.A woman . A poet but still you did have to lied to us about what your African name meant.

    Sincerely Delphine

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    1. yeah why did she had to lie to them about her name and you did good

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    2. do the kids like Mr, mwile

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    4. thanks Billy for your comment

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    5. Narvin what did you try and say when you said Why? Why couldn't tell us what your name meant

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    6. I like it good i can read it in my head as an expression good job.

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  14. Dear Nzila,
    If your name means born on the street
    i will call myself that.And my name will
    grow with me for as long as I long as
    i live thats why my name is delphine.

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    1. i did not get your letter. if your delphine why are you saying Cecile stuff?

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    3. I like you response to Cecile i think that what Delphine would say that

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    4. good Jeremy but wasent that from the book?

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    5. way did you sa Nazily in sted of Cecile

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  15. im sorry that im not acting my age but its no reason to lie to your kids. that not making us follow your foot steps.


    sincerely delphine

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    1. Kanagha I don't under stand what you mean with that not making us follow your foot steps?

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    2. You need a capital letters at the beginning of your sentences and i like your comment.

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    3. I don't now what you meet but you did a good job.

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  16. Dear Cecile,


    Hi i mother how have you been i been fine thanks for asking. Sorry i didn’t want to upset you. and you were born as a poet mother now i Understand a little bit more. Vonetta and Fern still want to be Flower girls for when Miss. Marva Hendrix Wedding with pa and i don't want them to get married . Vonetta, Fern like her. i Dont like her.

    P.S . I love you take care.
    Sincerely Delphine

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    1. i think you need to fix the first part!

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    2. Thanks Vanessa I like your card.

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  17. Dear cecil

    I am good how are you ?
    I had scolded vonetta and fern for wanting
    to be flower girls at pa’s wedding to another woman. from Delphine

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    1. Sycoya what did you mean with scolded did you mean schooled?

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    2. you spelled Cecile wrong and i like what you commented even know you weren't here so good job. :D

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    3. I agree with you sycoya because you letter kind of goes with what Delphine said to Cecile earlier

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  18. Dear Cecile,

    I am going to tell you something.
    Mr.mwila my teacher told me your real name NZila.
    He said that a child was born on the road.
    Mom you lied to me.
    I can't believe you did not tell me the truth.
    That just hurts.
    From
    Delphine

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    1. Leslies I thought you did a good Job with the emoshins.

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    2. you did a good job

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    3. you did a good job

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  19. Dear Cecil,
    pa has a wife now can you believe it but im sorry i just wanted to know why you lied to me that's all i wanted to know so dont get mad at me because you lied i did nothing to you but i still do love you but there was no purpose of lying because i was going t find out anyway and you got in your feelings a little bit for nothing but i'm still sorry for that


    p.s delphine and i do study

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  20. i like how you put what she says in every letter, "how are you I am good"

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  22. Dear Cecile,

    I am glad you told me the truth but why didn’t you just tell me the truth when i asked you what your name meant but it’s okay. Anyway I’m finally in sixth grade but me and my class aren’t happy with what teacher we have because we were supposed to have Miss honeywell as are teacher but instead we have Mr.Mweli he said that him and Miss Honeywell switched places so Miss Honeywell went to Africa to teach his class and he came from africa to teach us at are class. Mr. Mweli is the one who told me what your name meant and that’s why i got mad and
    wrote you that letter.

    Love always, Delphine

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